ISU PRESENTATION FEEDBACK

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General Comments

  • Presentation plans submitted
  • Uploaded files to the D2L Dropbox
  • Good volume, clear voice
  • Some great graphics, images
  • Attention-getter (Perhaps some over-use of “Imagine”)
  • Strong take-aways
  • Nice variation of slide themes (some imported themes)
  • Interesting book jackets

For next time 🙂

  • Always italicize the title
  • Correct format for in-text referencing
  • Increase discussion of author’s literary impact
  • Use possessives (Author’s Legacy – with an apostrophe to show possession)
  • Favourite quotes – clearly explain the story element – state in the title
  • Story elements: plot character, conflict, theme, setting, narration 
  • Favourite quotes – clearly explain the language device – state in the title
  • Writing style: diction, syntax, tone, types of imagery, types of figurative language (cue cards)
  • Increase font size
  • Less white space – conversely – avoid too much information on one slide
  • Watch your use of upper and lower cases
  • Check spelling
  • Remove the colon (:) after your name
  • then vs than, woman vs women

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